KOMPETENSI PROFESIONAL: ASSIGNMENT M5 LA2

ASSIGNMENT M5 LA 2

Instructions

Now you do the same steps with the following introduction sections. Study the sections and propose any necessary revision to make them more specific.

Sample 2

1        What is the issue of the discussion?

The issue of the discussion is whether children should follow parents’ advice or not.

2        What is the writer’s position in question of the discussion?

The writer agrees that children should follow their parents’ advice when they are young, but they should become more independent when they are older.

¹Some people say that children should always follow their parents’ advice; others claim that this is not always right. ²I believe that children should follow their parents’ advice when they are young, but they should become more independent when they are older.

Revision

Sentence 1         Parents’ advice is really important for children in order to help them make good choices and decisions in their life.

Sentence 2         Some people think that children should always follow their parents’ advice.

Sentence 3         Should children always follow the parents’ advice in their life?

Sample 3

1.      What is the issue of the discussion?

The issue of discussion is the increasing rate of crime is caused by the violent movies and games.

2.      What is the writer’s position in question of the discussion?

The writer tells disagreement that television and games is the root of violence and crimes in the society.

¹Many people hold the belief that violent movies and computer games have been the cause of increasing crime levels in many countries around the world today. ²Even though there are increasing rates of crime amongst the youth of today, I strongly disagree that television and games are at the root of this problem.

Revision:

Sentence 1         Nowadays, the level of crimes has increased in the world.

Sentence 2         Many people hold the belief that violent movies and computer games cause the increasing crime levels in the society.

Sentence 3         Even though there are increasing rates of crime amongst the youth of today, I strongly disagree that television and games

              are at the root of this problem.