LEARNING TASK M6 LA 2
Part 1: Getting to know with Application Letter
Read three examples
of Application Letters. Then answer the questions in Task 1.
TEXT 1
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Anna (Thi) Pan
987 Lewis St.
Charlottesville VA
22904 annapan@virginia.edu | 434-983-0000
April 22, 2015
Remi Monoco, Executive Assistant
The Metropolitan Waterfront
Alliance
457 Madison Avenue
New York, NY 10022
Dear Mr. Monoco:
I am applying for
the position of Office Associate
with the Metropolitan
Waterfront
Alliance (MWA) based
on the recommendation of a mutual friend,
Kim Power. I will graduate in May 2016 from the University of Virginia (U.Va.) with a Bachelor
of Urban and Environmental Planning, a Bachelor of
Arts in French and a
minor in Architecture.
I will
be moving to New
York
City soon and see this
position as the ideal opportunity to contribute the skills I have gained
from my professional experience,
academic studies, and diverse
background. I share the belief
with MWA that waterfront
areas
should be accessible
for
all, and I am strongly motivated to make the
New
York and New Jersey shores a pleasant place to
live, work and play.
My organizational
and communication skills
are well demonstrated in my work experiences
in nonprofit, corporate and student organization
settings. Currently, I intern with Piedmont
Council of the Arts
which shares similar responsibilities
to the position at
MWA. During my internship, I provide
administrative support, focusing on maintaining a contact
database of local
artists, creating a new
filing system for the council and
constructing e-mail campaigns.
I have also
interned at KPMG
Audit Form, a corporate
environment where attention to detail was essential
when managing client
files and proofreading financial statements. In addition, I
handled event logistics
and publicized
events when I served as publicity chair of
the Taiwanese Student
Association at
U.Va. I have acquired
a sophisticated understanding of
urban affairs
through my studies.
My
coursework included
site assessment and data
collection, application of
planning regulations,
and the development
of recommendations in order to create
neighborhood master plan
and transportation plan. Originally from Taiwan, my residence in Germany,
France and
the United States,
as
well as
my extensive
travel experience have fostered an ease in working with
people from diverse backgrounds.
Kim Power is sending
you
a letter in regards to
my qualifications
and I look
forward to discussing my candidacy for
this position
with you
as
well. Thank you
for your time and thoughtful consideration. I hope
to hear back from you soon.
Respectfully,
Anna (Thi) Pan
Enclosure: resumé. Adapted from https://career.virginia.edu/sites/career.virginia.edu/files/CoverLetter_Anna_Thi_Pan.pdf
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TEXT 2
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Patria Camp
290 Colonnade Dr. Apt 25
Charlottesville, Virginia 22903
March 25, 2015
Ms. Ann Nawaz
U.S. Department of Education
400 Maryland Avenue,
S.W.
(FB-6, Room 7E230) Washington,
DC 20202
Dear Ms. Nawaz:
My experiences
and status as a
third-year at
the University of Virginia make me
an ideal candidate for the
summer internship
program with
the U.S. Department of Education, which I learned
about at the Government and Nonprofit Career Expo
in D.C. last month. Your agency is
known for working to ensure
equal access to
education
for every child
and promoting educational excellence throughout
the nation. I
know that with my background and interest
in helping youth, I am a good fit for your
organization.
My volunteer work
throughout college has confirmed
my
interest in
and dedication
to childhood education.
By
volunteering at
Wesley Daycare in Charlottesville, Virginia, I learned a lot about child development by caring for
children ranging
from three months
to three years old. During my time
at Wesley, I had
the opportunity to observe student
and teacher roles
and a variety of
teaching techniques. Later, these skills
became important when I volunteered
with the Migrant
Aid program and had
the opportunity to tutor
two high school students.
I now
look forward to serving
as an advocate for youth
education by working in your After-School
Programs Division.
I am prepared for this
administrative role
as a result of
my
position as an
intern at the Weldon Cooper Center for
Public Service last summer. There, I coordinated internship placements
for over 200 students in the Charlottesville community.
More specifically, I collected
and organized
applications, corresponded with students and sponsors via email
and phone, maintained
an updated Excel
database of all internship sites and sponsor contacts, and created orientation
packets. I have honed
the organizational
and time- management
skills necessary to
be a successful intern
with the Department
of Education.
Thank you
for reviewing
my
application.
Should you
have any questions, you may
reach
me
using the contact
information listed
above.
Best regards,
Patrice Camp
Adapted from https://career.virginia.edu/sites/career.virginia.edu/files/CoverLetter_Patrice_Camp.pdf
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TEXT 3
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Wilson Easton Huffman
983 Culbreth
Rd. Charlottesville, VA 22903
January 25, 2015
Hiring Manager
Garvey, Schubert & Barer
123 14th Street
Los Angeles, CA 90064
Dear Hiring Manager:
Please accept this
letter
and the attached resume as an
indication of my sincere interest
in the open legal
assistant position at Garvey,
Schubert & Barer that I found on CAVLink, the University of
Virginia’s
job database. I
graduated in
December 2014 with a degree in
History and Sociology and would
like to gain experience in
the legal field before applying to law school.
While reviewing your website, I was pleased
to see that your
firm
operates in a wide variety of
spheres. The areas of
your practice to which I am particularly attracted are the Environment & Natural Resources
and Land Use
& Condemnation sectors.
Throughout my college career,
the courses I found most interesting were those revolving around subjects
such as
law, business, and land use. After taking a
course in Land, Law and
The Environment, my professor
took me on as an intern
to work at the University’s Institute for
Environmental Negotiations.
My
internship included reading reports, analyzing data, conducting
active research
contacting persons of interest to
arrange interviews, and giving
reports of my findings.
From my coursework and professional
experiences, I have developed the researching,
analytical
thinking and writing skills
necessary to be a successful legal assistant. In addition, I am
aware of the long hours
and hard work that
is required of the role.
I
am ready to dedicate myself to Garvey,
Schubert & Barer
in much the same way that I
committed myself to being a varsity athlete.
As a member of
the swim team, I devoted up to 30 hours a week
to practices, travel
and competition while maintaining a full course load.
I am eager
to learn from the many successful lawyers
at Garvey, Schubert & Barer
holding high peer review
ratings in
accordance with
Martindale-Hubbell Legal Network.
I hope
that you will
afford me the opportunity to
become a member of your
team.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I
can be reached
via phone (865-987-2222) or email (whuffman@gmail.com).
Sincerely
Wilson Huffman
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Task 1
Answer the questions by
providing evidence (expression, phrase, and sentence) to support your answer
Questions
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Application
Letter 1
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Application
Letter 2
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Application
Letter 3
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1. What is
the writer’s tone in each of the application letters?
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The tone of the letter is
formal and superior
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The tone of the letter is
formal and confident.
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The tone of the letter is
formal and confident.
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2.
What benefits the employer get for reading
these application letters?
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After reading these application
letters, the employers can make decision easily regarding to the recruitment
in his/her company because the candidates sent their qualifications.
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3. Which of
the application letters has the strong effect for the employers? Provide
arguments for your answer.
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I think the first application
letter that sent by Anna (Thi) Pan has strong effect for the employer. She is
recommended by Kim Power. I think Kim Power is someone who has good record in
that company. He is going to send letter to the company regarding to Anna’s
qualification.
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Task 2
Analyzing
each part of the application letters
To whom/ address
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Salutations
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Components
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Closure
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Statement of Purpose
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Qualifications
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Experience
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1
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Remi Monoco,
Executive Assistant
The Metropolitan Waterfront
Alliance
457 Madison
Avenue
New York, NY 10022
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Dear Mr. Monoco:
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I am applying for
the position of Office Associate with the
Metropolitan
Waterfront
Alliance (MWA) based on the
recommendation
of a mutual friend, Kim
Power.
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will graduate
in May2016 from the University of Virginia (U.Va.) with a Bachelor
of Urban and Environmental Planning, a Bachelor of Arts in French and a minor
in
Architecture
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- currently intern
with Piedmont Council of
the Arts which shares
similar responsibilities
to the position at MWA
- interned
at KPMG Audit Form, a corporate environment.
- handled event logistics and
publicized events to serve as publicity chair of
the Taiwanese Student
Association at University of Virginia
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Kim Power is sending you a
letter in regards to my qualifications and
I look
forward to discussing my candidacy for this
position with you
as well. Thank you
for your time and thoughtful consideration. I hope to hear back from
you soon.
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2
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Ms. Ann Nawaz
U.S. Department of Education
400 Maryland
Avenue, S.W.
(FB-6, Room 7E230) Washington,
DC 20202
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Dear Ms. Nawaz:
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My experiences
and status as a
third-year at
the University of Virginia make me
an ideal candidate for the
summer internship
program with
the U.S. Department of Education, which I learned
about at the Government and Nonprofit Career Expo
in D.C. last month. Your agency is
known for working to ensure
equal access to
education
for every child
and promoting educational excellence throughout
the nation. I
know that with my background and interest
in helping youth, I am a good fit for your
organization.
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A Third Year at the University of Virginia
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- My volunteer work
throughout college as confirmed
my interest
in and dedication to childhood education.
By volunteering at Wesley
Day
care in Charlottesville, Virginia
- During
my time at Wesley,
I had
the opportunity
to observe student and teacher roles
and a variety
of teaching techniques.
- I am prepared for this administrative role as a result
of my position as an intern at
the Weldon Cooper
Center for Public Service
last summer
- I coordinated internship placements
for over 200 students in
the Charlottesville community.
- I have
honed the organizational
and time-management skills necessary
to be a successful intern with the Department
of Education.
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Thank you for reviewing
my application. Should you
have any questions,
you
may reach me using the contact
information listed
above.
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3
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Hiring Manager
Garvey,
Schubert &
Barer
123 14th
Street
Los Angeles, CA 90064
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Dear Hiring Manager:
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Please accept this
letter
and the attached resume as an
indication of my sincere interest
in the open legal
assistant position at Garvey,
Schubert & Barer that I found on CAVLink, the University of
Virginia’s
job database.
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I graduated in December 2014 with a degree in History and
Sociology
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- After taking a
course in Land, Law and
the Environment, my professor took me on as an intern
to work at the University’s
Institute for Environmental Negotiations
- My internship included reading
reports, analyzing data, conducting
active research contacting persons
of interest to arrange interviews, and
giving reports of my findings.
- I have
developed the researching,
analytical
thinking and writing
skills necessary to be a successful legal assistant
- As a member of the swim team, I devoted
up to 30 hours a week
to practices, travel
and competition full
course load.
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Thank you for your time and consideration. I can be reached
via phone (865-987-2222)or
email (whuffman@gmail.com).
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Task 3
Kelly Jones is interested in applying for a job in Sun. She is preparing her drafts to apply for the job. Read the job vacancies below and Kelly’s drafts for her application letter.
Kelly Jones is interested in applying for a job in Sun. She is preparing her drafts to apply for the job. Read the job vacancies below and Kelly’s drafts for her application letter.
Draft
Created on Aug 26 1997 06:07. To return to: Employment
Opportunities Home
Page
SunEmploymentReq#:CB974BA26
SUMMARY
DescriptiveTitle: WebTech.Intern
Skills: HTML,UNIX,Java,C,C++
FunctionsArea: Engineering:SoftwareEngineering
Location: TBD, CBA
DESCRIPTION
The Technical
Services Group of Sun's South Bay support organization located in the San
Francisco peninsula area is looking for a summer intern to create and
maintain a Web site for internal technical product deployments. This Web site
would be the primary source of information pertaining to deployment
schedules, Sun product information, bugs/features/workarounds, and user
communications. The intern will have opportunity to join the deployment teams
to learn various aspects of product
rollout, to aid
in the preparation
of Web site
contents.
This position would provide good opportunity
to work with NetScape web software, Hot Java, and the Java programming
language. Familiarity with web site setup, HTML, web page design and layout,
and programming experience in Java, C, or C++ would be a plus for the ideal
candidate.
CONTACT:
To apply, please reference the requisition
number of CB974BA26 and email, fax
or mail your resume, attention Recruiter: Staffing86/OWSMI97, using:
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Resume
Submittal Form
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Fax
number: 415-336-3701
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Mail
Address:
Sun Microsystems, Inc. 2550 Garcia Avenue
Mountain View, CA 94043-1100
Mail Stop: MTV04-118
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Application Letter 1
422 W. Spring Forest Rd. Raleigh, NC 27613
September 1, 1997
Robert Switzer
IT Recruiting
Sun Microsystems, Inc.
2550 Garcia Ave.
Mountain View, CA 94043-1100
Mail Stop: MTV04-118
Re: Sun Employment Req#: CB974BA26
Dear Mr. Switzer:
Using your database on the Internet to locate
job opportunities, I noticed your summer internship opening for a Web
Technologist. My work experience and studies qualify me for this position.
They have exposed me to the newest developments in technology which will give
your company a leading edge in the Internet marketplace.
As my résumé illustrates, my work involving Web related
activities has been extensive. I have installed, configured, and maintained a
Web server for both the Software Development Lab at North Carolina State
University and for the Mechanical Graphics Support Center (MGSC) at IBM. I am
the Web Master for the home pages of the MGSC Department at IBM and for the
Navigators at Duke University. In addition, I acquired programming
experiences at IBM, writing CGI's and developing the Mechanical Technology
Center Product Manager, a Web- based product manager for IBM's Network
Hardware Engineering Department. During a Co- op with Federal Express, I
contributed to the software engineering development process and wrote C++
code. Currently, I am enrolled in JAVA programming and Software Engineering
classes.
While pursuing a degree in Computer Science at North Carolina State
University, I have been active in the University Scholars Program. This
program has broadened my knowledge of and appreciation for peoples of many
cultures and beliefs. I would apply this awareness in my work at Sun that
requires collaboration with diverse team members.
I would appreciate the opportunity to further elaborate on my
qualifications. I can be reached at (919) 847-2259. Thank you for your
consideration in reviewing my résumé, and I look forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Kelly W. Jones
Enclosure: Résumé
Adapted from http://www4.ncsu.edu/~jlarsen/rex2/letter1.html
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Application Letter 2
422 W. Spring Forest Rd. Raleigh, NC 27613
September 1, 1997
Robert Switzer
IT Recruiting
Sun Microsystems, Inc.
2550 Garcia Ave.
Mountain View, CA 94043-1100
Mail Stop: MTV04-118
Dear Mr. Switzer:
I recently saw your ad for an internship as a
Web Tech. I feel that this position will allow me to expand the skills I have
learned in my previous jobs and in my coursework.
As you can see from my résumé, I am currently
enrolled at North Carolina State majoring in Computer Science. I have taken
relevent courses including Java Programming and Software Engineering. In
addition, I have extended work experience with development of web sites. You
can find the details of these positions on my résumé. I also have excellent
interpersonal and communication skills. As you can see, I have sufficiently
prepared myself with the qualifications necessary for this position.
Therefore, I would like to use the skills learned in my courses and on the
job to help Sun Microsystems grow and become an even more profitable company.
I would be happy to schedule a meeting with you at your earliest
convenience. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Kelly W. Jones
Enclosure: Résumé
Adapted from http://www4.ncsu.edu/~jlarsen/rex2/letter2.html
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Application Letter 3
422 W. Spring Forest Rd. Raleigh, NC 27613
September 1, 1997
Robert Switzer
IT Recruiting
Sun Microsystems, Inc.
2550 Garcia Ave.
Mountain View, CA 94043-1100
Mail Stop: MTV04-118
Re: Sun Employment Req#: CB974BA26
Dear Mr. Switzer:
I am writing to submit my résumé for a summer intern position as a Web
Technologist, referred to online as requisition number CB97BA26. My previous
academic and co-op experiences have made me the most suitable candidate for
this position.
As you can see from my résumé, my previous work
experience has prepared me for this position. I have had lots of experience
with Web related activities. I have installed, configured, and maintained a
Web server for both the Software Development Lab at NCSU and for the MGSC at
IBM. I am the Web Master of the home pages for both the MGSC Department at
IBM and for the Navigators at Duke. I have acquired lots of programming
experiences. I wrote CGI's for IBM and developed the Mechanical Technology
Center Product Manager for one of IBM's departments. I had the opportunity to
experience the software engineering development process and write C++ code
during a co-op with Federal Express. These experiences have sufficiently
prepared me with the qualifications necessary for this position.
This summer internship would give me the
opportunity to apply my knowledge while broadening my experience. I really
enjoy jobs that challenge me to use my abilities to their fullest potential.
Enclosed is a copy of my résumé for your consideration. I would appreciate
the opportunity to talk about my qualifications further in person with your
recruiter. I can be reached at (919)-523-3372, (919)-847-2259, or at kwjones@eos.ncsu.edu. If I have not
heard from you in the next week, I will call you to set up an appointment.
Sincerely,
Kelly W. Jones
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Task 4
With the points of analysis set out in the
table below, analyze the content of each application letters above
(Task 3) With the points of analysis set out in the table
below, analyze the content of each application letters above.
Application Letter 1
Paragraphs
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Points
of analysis
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Evidence from the letters
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Paragraph
1
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Why are you writing?
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I noticed your summer internship opening for a Web
Technologist. My work experience and studies qualify me for this position.
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How did you
get
the
employer’s
name?
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-
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Where did you find
their job listing?
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Using your database on the Internet to locate job
opportunities.
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Who referred you?
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No one (Using your database on the Internet to locate job opportunities).
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What
position are you applying for?
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A Web Technologist.
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Paragraph
2
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Why are you qualified for the position
you are applying for?
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As my résumé
illustrates, my work involving Web related activities has been extensive. I
have installed, configured, and maintained a Web server for both the Software
Development Lab at North Carolina State University and for the Mechanical
Graphics Support Center (MGSC) at IBM.
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What have you done
that applies to
this job/position?
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I am the Web
Master for the home pages of the MGSC Department at IBM and for the
Navigators at Duke University. In addition, I acquired programming
experiences at IBM, writing CGI's and developing the Mechanical Technology
Center Product Manager, a Web- based product manager for IBM's Network
Hardware Engineering Department.
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What sort of fit is there between your
experience and the job/position you applied
for
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During a Co-
op with Federal Express, I contributed to the software engineering
development process and wrote C++ code. Currently, I am enrolled in JAVA
programming and Software Engineering classes.
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What is special about
you that should
be
considered
for this job/position?
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While
pursuing a degree in Computer Science at North Carolina State University, I
have been active in the University Scholars Program. This program has
broadened my knowledge of and appreciation for peoples of many cultures and
beliefs. I would apply this awareness in my work at Sun that requires
collaboration with diverse team members.
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Paragraph
3
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What do you expect to happen after
you send the application letter?
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Thank you for your
consideration in reviewing my résumé, and I look forward to hearing from you.
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How can the employer
contact you?
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I would appreciate the opportunity to further elaborate
on my qualifications. I can be reached at (919) 847-2259.
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Application Letter 2
Paragraphs
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Points
of analysis
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Evidence from the letters
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Paragraph
1
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Why are you writing?
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I feel that this position will allow me to
expand the skills I have learned in my previous jobs and in my coursework.
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How did you
get
the
employer’s
name?
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-
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Where did you find
their job listing?
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From
advertisement
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Who referred you?
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No one
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What
position are you applying for?
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As a web tech
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Paragraph
2
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Why are you qualified for the position
you are applying for?
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I am
currently enrolled at North Carolina State majoring in Computer Science. I
have taken relevant courses including Java Programming and Software
Engineering.
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What have you done
that applies to
this job/position?
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In addition,
I have extended work experience with development of web sites. You can find
the details of these positions on my résumé. I also have excellent
interpersonal and communication skills.
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What sort of fit is there between your
experience and the job/position you applied
for
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As you can
see, I have sufficiently prepared myself with the qualifications necessary
for this position.
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What is special about
you that should
be
considered
for this job/position?
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Therefore, I
would like to use the skills learned in my courses and on the job to help Sun
Microsystems grow and become an even more profitable company.
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Paragraph
3
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What do you expect to happen after
you send the application letter?
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I would be happy to schedule a meeting with you at your earliest
convenience. Thank you for your time.
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How can the employer
contact you?
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Application Letter 3
Paragraphs
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Points
of analysis
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Evidence from the letters
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Paragraph
1
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Why are you writing?
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I am writing
to submit my résumé for a summer intern
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How did you
get
the
employer’s
name?
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Where did you find
their job listing?
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Referred to
online as requisition number CB97BA26
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Who referred you?
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What
position are you applying for?
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As a web
technologist
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Paragraph
2
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Why are you qualified for the position
you are applying for?
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As you can
see from my résumé, my previous work experience has prepared me for this
position. I have had lots of experience with Web related activities. I have
installed, configured, and maintained a Web server for both the Software
Development Lab at NCSU and for the MGSC at IBM. I am the Web Master of the
home pages for both the MGSC Department at IBM and for the Navigators at
Duke. I have acquired lots of programming experiences.
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What have you done
that applies to
this job/position?
|
I wrote CGI's
for IBM and developed the Mechanical Technology Center Product Manager for
one of IBM's departments.
|
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What sort of fit is there between your
experience and the job/position you applied
for
|
I had the
opportunity to experience the software engineering development process and
write C++ code during a co-op with Federal Express. These experiences have
sufficiently prepared me with the qualifications necessary for this position.
|
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What is special about
you that should
be
considered
for this job/position?
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This summer
internship would give me the opportunity to apply my knowledge while
broadening my experience. I really enjoy jobs that challenge me to use my
abilities to their fullest potential.
|
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Paragraph
3
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What do you expect to happen after
you send the application letter?
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If I have not heard from you in the next week, I will call you to set up
an appointment.
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How can the employer
contact you?
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I can be reached at (919)-523-3372, (919)-847-2259, or
at kwjones@eos.ncsu.edu.
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Task 5
Supposed that you are in the Human
Resource Department at Sun, your task is to decide which of these three letters
best matches and elaborates your needs as highlighted in the job description
and requirements. Review and evaluate the content of these letters on the basis
of:
- What your company are looking for in an employee;
- The requirements of the position;
- The persuasiveness of evidence provided by the applicants
I think, if I was in the
Human Resources Department, I would choose application letter 1. It’s
stated in application 1: "Using your
database on the Internet to locate job opportunities, I noticed your summer
internship opening for a Web Technologist". Here clearly the applicant
writes down the position to be applied for that is being sought by the
company.
The requirements of the
position are also written by the applicant "As my résumé illustrates, my
work involving Web related activities has been extensive. I have installed,
configured, and maintained a Web server for both Software Development Lab at
North Carolina State University and for Mechanical Graphics Support Center
(MGSC) at IBM I am the Web Master for the home page of the MGSC Department at
IBM and for the Navigators at Duke University In addition, I acquired
programming experiences at IBM, writing CGI's and developing the Mechanical
Technology Center Product Manager, a Web-based product manager for IBM's
Network Hardware Engineering Department During a Coop with Federal Express, I
contributed to the software engineering development process and wrote C ++
code. Currently, I am running in JAVA programming and Software Engineering
classes.
The persuasiveness of evidence provided by the applicants
is indicated by the sentences "While pursuing a degree in Computer Science at
North Carolina State University, I have been active in the University
Scholars Program. This program has broadened my knowledge of and appreciation
for peoples of many culture and beliefs; I would apply this awareness in my
work at Sun that requires collaboration with diverse team members.
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Part 2: Constructing Application Letters
Task 6
Read the job vacancy and the applicant’s resume. Use information in the applicant’s resume boosting potential values the applicant has to meet the job requirements.
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Paragraphs
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Points of analysis
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What you write in your application letter
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Paragraph 1
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Why
are you writing?
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I’m writing this application
letter in order that I am interest of the position of English Instructor in
Princeton Review Korea
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How did you get the employer’s name?
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From the internet
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Where did you find their job listing?
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In English Website
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Who referred you?
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No body
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What position
are you applying
for?
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Instructor of Business English and
Communication Skill
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Paragraph 2
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Why
are
you qualified
for the position
You are applying for?
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Having recently obtained my Bachelor’s Degree in Notarized and Apostilled in the in New Zealand. I wish to bring my knowledge, skills and commitment to excellence to your company’s innovative environment. |
What have you
done that applies
to this job/position?
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I have taught as English Teacher
is a private school and a government school
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What sort of fit is there
between your
Experience
and the job/ position you applied
for
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By being an English teacher I
think I have had much experience in speaking because there is practice to
find foreigner and I‘ve been habitual
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What is special about
you
that should
be considered for this job/position?
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By having many experience in
teaching and having habitation in speaking with foreigner, and teach in some
schools, it’s easier for me to handle the students and develop their speaking
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3
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What
do you expect to happen after
you
send the application letter?
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For additional details regarding my qualification and expertise, please review my attached resume. |
How can the employer
contact you?
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I can be contacted on (019) 567-2157
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Task 7
Now,
let’s put it all together to make an application letter
to respond to the job vacancy in
Task
6.
Application
letter
313 King Road
Rd. Rolex TK 2830
September 24, 2018
Nalexa Steward
Course Manager
The Princeton Review Korea
Malaya City 1414
Dear Mr. Steward
I recently saw your
advertisement for an English Instructor in a web. I feel that this position
will suit me and digging my skills that I got before.
As you can see that my last
experience supports me to get this job. I have had many related experience in
teaching English. I have taught in some private shools and a government
school. I also ever taught in some courses.
Having recently obtained my Bachelor’s Degree in Notarized and Apostilled in the in New Zealand. I wish to bring my knowledge, skills and commitment to excellence to your company’s innovative environment. By having many experience in teaching and having habitation in speaking with foreigner, and teach in some schools, it’s easier for me to handle the students and develop their speaking
For additional details regarding my qualification and expertise, please review my attached resume.
For additional details regarding my qualification and expertise, please review my attached resume. I can be reached at (019) 567-2157. Thank you for taking the time to consider this application and I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Faithfully,
Tine
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